If you want to build confidence in your writers, try using samples from their writing as mentor texts. I use professional mentor texts to motivate writers to compose and revise, but I notice writers respond more positively to the use of mentor texts when their own work is included in the mix.
Here are a few ways you might use student writing as a motivational and instructional tool:
Excerpt student texts that align with your teaching points. Since I know I will be focusing on specific craft moves during a genre study, I look for students using specific writing crafts during early drafting stages. For example, in a personal narrative unit, I might look for effective use of dialogue, setting descriptions, strong leads, and character development. I excerpt two or more examples of a craft move to include more student writing and to avoid the mistaken impression that there is only one way to develop character or describe a setting. During my mini lessons, I incorporate these student samples by saying something ike this: “We have been looking at a lot of published writers’ work during our unit, but I noticed that a lot you are already using many of the craft moves we will be studying. Let’s look at a few examples of how you are doing this work so that we can learn from each other.”
Excerpt student texts to highlight multiple writerly moves. Early in the school year, I excerpt one or two sentences of student writing from each student and identify the craft or writing move the writer is using. This bank of 20 to 30 excerpts can become a tool for all the writers in the room as they search for ways to revise and improve their own writing. Using student excerpts can be a powerful teaching tool, especially if you include a wide range of writing that moves beyond just description. For example, if I excerpt one student’s writing because it effectively uses a simile, the next excerpt might include strong verbs, and the next a few specific, proper nouns. Make sure to excerpt at least one sentence from every writer in your class if you use this strategy. Your message should be loud and clear: we are all part of the writing community, and we can learn from each other.
Excerpt student texts and ask your writers what they notice. Excerpt one or two sentences from student writing and then ask your writers what they notice. I often group the students and ask them to jot notes about what they notice about the first four excerpts, while another group of students works on the next set of excerpts, and so on. This way, more student voices can be heard while they engage in conversations about what they notice about each other’s writing. Because I want to frame the noticing around the purpose of mentor texts, I might cue the students by saying something like: “Look at these sentences from our writing. In small groups, I am going to ask you to identify what makes this writing work. Think about what strategies and crafts you can borrow as you read these excerpts. Do the sentences work because they describe? Or is it because of the verbs? Or nouns? You decide what makes them effective and then you will have a chance to share your thoughts with the group.”
Cue students to notice what they can borrow from other writers in the room. Once students can comfortably identify how to use mentor texts, you can ask them to read each other’s work for something they might borrow. One way to organize this type of work is to ask every student to leave one page of the writing on their desk. Then, ask students to filter around the room, reading at least four or five pieces with the goal of identifying one or more craft moves they might use in their own writing. After about 10 or 15 minutes, pause and ask students to share their thoughts, including the name of the writer who inspired them. A student might share something like this: “I noticed that Susan used the verb “trudging” when she described how hard it was to walk her dog in the snow. Susan inspired me to look at my verbs to see if I can change any of them to be more active.”
Professional mentor texts are an essential part of a writing workshop classroom. But remember that we have student writing mentors right in front of us every day, and their work can become an integral part of our writing routines.
Mark Overmeyer Author of When Writing Workshop Isn’t Working, 2nd Edition.